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04 December 2008 @ 07:01 pm
Happy H/D Holidays, bewarethesmirk!  
Author: _pinkchocolate
Recipient: bewarethesmirk
Title: Out From Under
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco, Draco/Astoria
Summary: When Draco catches Potter in a compromising position, he reacts in a way only a true Slytherin would.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
Warning(s): Infidelity, dub-con
Epilogue compliant? No
Word Count: ~17k
Author's Notes: Dear bewarethesmirk, I couldn’t decide between this fic and another one, but nqdonne assured me that secretary!Draco would be more appropriate than unending angst. Hopefully I managed to hit on a few of your requests and avoid your squicks. I hope you have a wonderful holiday season! Huge thanks to my many betas for putting up with me through the tumultuous writing process.

( Out From Under )
Lindsay: H/D marklavillanueva on December 6th, 2008 03:36 am (UTC)
Gah, I love it. Brilliantly written. You have such a way with one-liners, packing so much into every sentence. I have a great love for down-on-his-luck-Draco!fics, and I love how you took that cliche and spun it on its head, not having Harry swoop in and save him but having Draco work at saving himself - even to the point that he almost sacrifices his happiness. But I like that he isn't such a cold, driven bastard that he lets his sense of duty get in the way of what he really wants - and I love that he's still devious enough to use it to get Harry all riled up. Harry's right, he is doing it on purpose. :D

Also, I adore the way you write sex - it's not glamorized at all, and it's all the more hot for it. I had a discussion with tray_la_la not long ago about why there's a lack of condom usage in HP fic, and the consensus was that most people seem to think it takes away from the eroticism of the act, but I love that you've included realistic details like that. They bring the fic to life - hot n' sexy life.