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04 December 2008 @ 07:01 pm
Happy H/D Holidays, bewarethesmirk!  
Author: _pinkchocolate
Recipient: bewarethesmirk
Title: Out From Under
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco, Draco/Astoria
Summary: When Draco catches Potter in a compromising position, he reacts in a way only a true Slytherin would.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
Warning(s): Infidelity, dub-con
Epilogue compliant? No
Word Count: ~17k
Author's Notes: Dear bewarethesmirk, I couldn’t decide between this fic and another one, but nqdonne assured me that secretary!Draco would be more appropriate than unending angst. Hopefully I managed to hit on a few of your requests and avoid your squicks. I hope you have a wonderful holiday season! Huge thanks to my many betas for putting up with me through the tumultuous writing process.

( Out From Under )
Daisy-chama: Golden Compass - compassdaisy_chan on December 7th, 2008 06:40 pm (UTC)
Oh my. I have... rather mixed feelings about this fic.
First of all, let me say it was not the writing. It was hot and confused and ambiguous and I really found that interesting. But there's something about the dubious consent and blackmail premise that made it hard for me to envision Harry's drastic change in attitude to wanting a relationship with Draco, even a closeted one. I'm fine with the idea of the sex making Harry want him physically, but I'm not really clear where the emotional connection came in, other than that one brief moment before Harry's trip, which seemed to me more of a starting off point than a game changer. Also, Harry careless switch from Zacharias to Draco seemed very much unlike Harry to me.

In any case, this was very hot. Great job.