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28 December 2012 @ 11:18 pm
HAPPY H/D HOLIDAYS, LEO_DRACONIS!  
Author: sdkshelly
Recipient: leo_draconis
Title: Swish and Flick
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco, non-explicit Ron/Hermione/Pansy
Summary: The Swish and Flick is the last place Draco wants to spend his Saturday evening—especially when he discovers Potter is also in attendance—and he can't wait for the night to end. Unfortunately for Draco, time is not on his side.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
Warning(s): Explicit sex.
Epilogue compliant? Not in the slightest.
Word Count: 7300 words
Author's Notes: My undying love to my betas, T and T. You're both angels! Happy holidays, leo_draconis! I hope you enjoy this!



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Appleling: Appleling icon2appleling on January 3rd, 2013 08:56 am (UTC)
Oh, oh this was incredible! This was AWESOME! The mother of fluff! Harry, dear sweet darling Harry, with his smiles and his fat Santa jumper and the naughty mistletoe trick.... *happy sigh* He was sooooo swoon-worthy! And Draco! Flustered, pining yet insecure Draco was at his cutest! I loved that Draco can't help but be happy and breathless and yet so flustered around Harry! It was adorable! And omg RON/HERMIONE/PANSY THREESOME FOR THE WIN!! Seriously, that gave me so many sexy images in my head *flails* I swear that's my next O3P (along with Draco/Luna/Ginny of course)!!! I have no words to describe how much I enjoyed reading this because each word that popped into my head sounded so inadequate to explain this happy, bubbly, overwhelmingly fluffy feeling in me... *loves so much*
쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: secret garden - ra im happinesssdkshelly on January 18th, 2013 06:40 pm (UTC)
Thank you, thank you! Your comment made me beam when I first read it--it still does! I'm so glad you enjoyed this and that it gave you so many happy feelings. :D <333
i can see your house from herewho_la_hoop on January 4th, 2013 10:12 pm (UTC)
It's groundhog day! Groundhog day, with extra cocks! :D Ahhh, I loved this, mystery author. It was original and fun, and also very hot. Great fun indeed.
쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: secret garden - ra im happinesssdkshelly on January 18th, 2013 06:41 pm (UTC)
Everything is better with extra cocks! ;D

Thanks so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. <3
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쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: secret garden - ra im happinesssdkshelly on January 18th, 2013 06:41 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much! :D
flaminia_x: pic#118653548flaminia_x on January 5th, 2013 11:53 pm (UTC)
Love this!! What a great Groundhog-day-esque fic - great concept and even better execution. Hot stuff with the boys, Pansy's marvelous (love her with Ron and Hermione, btw), and the enchanted mistletoe and the jumper and the lecherous bartender and the coffee! Awesome.
쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: secret garden - ra im happinesssdkshelly on January 18th, 2013 06:42 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing it and am so pleased you enjoyed it. :D
funnybehbeeh on January 7th, 2013 02:20 am (UTC)
Oh. My. God.
There are no words to describe.
Nothing fits. At all.
BUT OH MY GOD
LOVEEEE
Ghhahhahahhah
I think I forgot how to breathe a little bit.
Don't mind me, I need to control myself take a coldddd shower before I can cyber stalk you.
Anyway. <3
쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: secret garden - ra im happinesssdkshelly on January 18th, 2013 06:43 pm (UTC)
Ahhhhh thank you! I appreciate your words--having no words is the best compliment of all actually! I'm so glad you enjoyed this. :D
Keeper of the Cocks: SDK_Patronus magictorino10154 on January 8th, 2013 12:16 am (UTC)
Oh, I love the Groundhog Day-esque idea! Love Draco trying to figure out what's going on, the subtle differences between each pass, the memories he can't quite remember how he knows in the first place. I *loved* when Draco finally decided to go for it:

"Scared, Malfoy?" he whispers.

Draco's heart thumps in his chest. "Not anymore." Draco's eyes fall closed and he kisses him.


*melts*

The sex is delicious (Rimming FTW!!) but the end is perfection. Lovely, lovely work.

쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: secret garden - ra im happinesssdkshelly on January 18th, 2013 06:44 pm (UTC)
Thanks, bb! And thanks for all your hand-holding throughout writing this (and the other zillion stories I went through, lol). I couldn't have completed it without your cheerleading and support! <333
Oncloud999: key umbrellaoncloud999 on January 8th, 2013 08:49 am (UTC)
ooohhhh!! this was sweet! =)
쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: secret garden - ra im happinesssdkshelly on January 18th, 2013 06:44 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :D
Marianne: defaulteidheann_writes on January 8th, 2013 09:19 am (UTC)
*fans self*

Fun, clever, steamy, and hot. Pansy being annoyed that Draco knew her "surprise" and.. yeah steamy much? Loved this!
쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: secret garden - ra im happinesssdkshelly on January 18th, 2013 06:48 pm (UTC)
Yay, thank you so much! :D
Bring forth the tale of dicks: curlewbirdsofshore on January 9th, 2013 07:17 am (UTC)
Hah, this was great! Loved Harry's scheming, and dogged persistence. Draco's POV was lovely, and the smut was delicious.
쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: secret garden - ra im happinesssdkshelly on January 18th, 2013 06:48 pm (UTC)
Thank you!! So glad you enjoyed it. :D
nonajf: Ebenholtznonajf on January 9th, 2013 03:42 pm (UTC)
I like this! I didn't figure out Harry had done it until the bit with the buttons. I suspected Pansy, then Hermione. I like this tricky, determined Harry!
쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: secret garden - ra im happinesssdkshelly on January 18th, 2013 06:49 pm (UTC)
Glad I could keep you guessing. :D Thank you! Happy you liked!
(Anonymous) on January 11th, 2013 03:28 am (UTC)
nice, very original plot and nicely written! congratulations!
쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: secret garden - ra im happinesssdkshelly on January 18th, 2013 06:49 pm (UTC)
Thanks muchly! :D
lamerezouille: antisocial #1lamerezouille on January 11th, 2013 08:11 pm (UTC)
That was really great! I love what you did with the magical mistletoe trope, and how magnificently you handled it. Your writing was very engaging, and I love that you didn't need to explain exactly what spell Harry used. "Just magic" is always the best explanation as far as I'm concerned!

Also, I now strangely crave Hermione/Pansy/Ron fic...

쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: secret garden - ra im happinesssdkshelly on January 20th, 2013 06:08 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm so flattered that you enjoyed the trope and you feel it was handled well--I was worried about it becoming too repetitive and therefore boring, I have to admit! I appreciate your comments--so glad you enjoyed it!

LOL yes! This gave me a new appreciation of that threesome and the possibilities are endless!
secretsolitaire: nghsecretsolitaire on January 12th, 2013 04:39 pm (UTC)
Super-hot, with a clever plot! (Heh, I rhymed. :-P)
쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: secret garden - ra im happinesssdkshelly on January 20th, 2013 06:08 pm (UTC)
Thank you muchly, glad you enjoyed it...uh, thusly? Haha /fails at rhyme

<3
shonamukhi: pic#119586170shonamukhi on January 12th, 2013 08:31 pm (UTC)
Dawww~ so cute! Beautifuly written <3
쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: secret garden - ra im happinesssdkshelly on January 20th, 2013 06:08 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :D
Forever flirting with sanitydacro on January 13th, 2013 02:01 am (UTC)
Awesome! Man, how I loved this fic. It's a rare writer who can tackle flashbacks (and flash forwards) without losing their readers in the process. The pace was perfect, wonderful voice and I couldn't get enough of the sexual tension. Masterfully told.
Well done!
쉘리 Unmistakably Oatmeal: secret garden - ra im happinesssdkshelly on January 20th, 2013 06:10 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!! I worried endlessly about the jumping around in time bit, especially in the middle of a time loop, so I am so pleased you didn't find it confusing! And I feel I'm rather weak at UST so that makes me extra happy as well. Thank you so much! :D